Frankie, some thoughts on your project and blog so far;

The blog is a too cluttered with irrelevant ‘staff’ postings. Can you delete these so that followers of your blog can see your reflections only? AO 1 demands ‘clarity’.

Your blog is the vehicle for your Activity Log. It is important that you tell the story of the project. You need to include all details from today’s session, not just the main points.

Can you illustrate your blog more? It looks a bit bit dull so far.

Although you have done the work, you have not really shown your complete Project Proposal here. This is vital!

Some good work done on AO 2 - the reviews of the short films watched are interesting if a bit superficial. You must include references in a bibliography or similar form.

Primary research sources must be used. How have you found out about short films or blogs directly from people who know about them and can help you with yours?

Have you completed the ‘5 W’s’ sheet? It’s not on the blog.