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Muntasir feedback

Muntasir, some thoughts on your project and blog so far.

You have clearly posted your Project Proposal form. The main question though is not clear- you need to change this to something like, ” Can I make a film using ……..”. Whatever te wording, the proposal must be in the form of a question.

Can you include some more images n your blog/ They help to illustrate your work.

AO1 Your activity log is complete but lacks some detail - try to include all the activities covered eery seson, and your thoughts about them. Can you show where your plans changed during the project?

AO 2 For research, you must show that you have used a range of sources. Can you look at three blogs and evaluate them as discussed? Also have you asked your target audience about their thoughts on your proposal?

Have you done the ‘5 W’s’ questions set for homework last week? Thought not!

Include a bibliography!